Sample Issue Topic:
The best ideas arise from a passionate interest in
commonplace things.
Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement
above and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and
supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might
or might not hold true and explain how those considerations shape your
position.
The following are sample responses and commentary on those
responses, which explain how the response was scored. There are responses and
scoring comments for essays with scores of 6, 5, 4, 3, 2, and 1.
Note: Sample responses are reproduced
exactly as written, including misspellings, wrong choice of words,
typographical and grammatical errors, etc., if any.
The following sample issue response received a score of 6:
Passion is clearly necessary for a truly great idea to take
hold among a people—passion either on the part of the original thinker, the
audience, or ideally both. The claim that the most lucrative subject matter for
inspiring great ideas is “commonplace things” may seem initially to be
counterintuitive. After all, aren't great ideas usually marked by their
extraordinary character? While this is true, their extraordinary character is
as often as not directly derived from their insight into things that had
theretofore gone unquestioned. While great ideas certainly can arise through
seemingly pure innovation . . . say, for example, Big Bang cosmology, which
developed nearly all of its own scientific and philosophical precepts through
its own process of formation, it is nevertheless equally true that such
groundbreaking thought was, and is, still largely a reevaluation of previous
assumptions to a radical degree . . . after all, the question of the ultimate
nature of the universe, and man's place in it, has been central to human
thought since the dawn of time. Commonplace things are, additionally, necessary
as material for the generation of “the best ideas” since certainly the success
among an audience must be considered in evaluating the significance and quality
of an idea.
The advent of Big Bang cosmology, which occured in
rudimentary form almost immediately upon Edwin Hubble's first observations at
the Hooker telescope in California
during the early 20th century, was the most significant advance in mankind's
understanding of the universe in over 400 years. The seemingly simple fact that
everything in the universe, on the very large scale, is moving away from
everything else in fact betrays nearly all of our scientific knowledge of the
origins and mechanics of the universe. This slight, one might even say
commonplace, distortion of tint on a handful of photographic plates carried
with it the greatest challenge to Man's general, often religiously reinforced,
conception of the nature of the world to an extent not seen since the days of
Galileo. Not even Charles Darwin's theory, though it created more of a stir
than Big Bang cosmology, had such shattering implications for our conceptions
of the nature of our reality. Yet it is not significant because it introduced
the question of the nature of what lies beyond Man's grasp. A tremendous number
of megalithic ruins, including the Pyramids both of Mexico
and Egypt , Stonehenge ,
and others, indicate that this question has been foremost on humankind's
collective mind since time immemorial. Big Bang cosmology is so incredibly
significant in this line of reasoning exactly because of the degree to which it
changed the direction of this generally held, constantly pondered, and very
ancient train of thought.
Additionally, there is a diachronic significance to the
advent of Big Bang cosmology, which is that, disregarding limitations such as
the quality of optical devices available and the state of theoretical math, it
could have happened at any point in time. That is to say, all evidence points
to roughly the same raw intellectual capacity for homo sapiens throughout our history,
our progress has merely depended upon the degree of it that a person happens to
inherit, a pace that has been increasing rapidly since the industrial
revolution. Yet this discovery had to happen at a certain point in time or
another—it cannot have been happening constantly or have never happened yet
still be present—and this point in time does have its own significance. That
significance is precisely the fact that the aforementioned advent must have
occurred at precisely the point in time at which it truly could have occured—that
is to say, it marks the point in our history when we had progressed
sufficiently to begin examining, with remarkable substantiated acuity, the
workings of the universe across distances that would take millions of human
lifetimes to reach or to traverse. The point for the success of this advent
must necessarily have been, additionally, the point at which the audience
concerned was capable and prepared to accept such a radical line of reasoning.
Both factors, a radical, passionate interpretation of the
commonplace and the preparedness to accept such an interpretation, are
necessary for the formulation of a truly great idea. If the
passion is absent from an inquiry by the thinker or by the bulk of an audience,
the idea will die out if it comes to fruition at all. If the material is not
sufficiently commonplace to be considered by an informed audience of sufficient
size, the same two hazards exist. Given these two factors, the idea must still
be found palatable and interesting by the audience if it is to hope to gain a
foothold and eventually establish itself in a significant fashion.
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